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Drabble: Immortal Beloved, Neville/Sprout
Title: Immortal Beloved
Author: ellensmithee
Pairings: Neville/Sprout
A/N: For the Rare Pair challenge.


Every year on the anniversary of her death, he would have her favorite flowers and plants brought from the gardens and greenhouses to adorn her tomb.

Later he would go there alone, press his face against the cool marble, and let the tears come. "Pomona," he would whisper.

She who had believed in him when no one else would.

She who had introduced him to love and carnal pleasures.

She who had taught him everything about plants, their uses and their... abuses.

At dawn, the Dark Lord would leave his beloved's side for another long year of emptiness and loneliness.
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ellensmithee From: ellensmithee Date: February 14th, 2004 02:32 pm (UTC) (Link)

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Thanks, I think. ;-) But My Sharona?!
ellensmithee From: ellensmithee Date: February 14th, 2004 02:33 pm (UTC) (Link)

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LOL! Oh, I get it. *dies* That was unintentional. Should I change it?
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ellensmithee From: ellensmithee Date: February 14th, 2004 02:36 pm (UTC) (Link)

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It's not really supposed to be funny, though.
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ellensmithee From: ellensmithee Date: February 14th, 2004 02:40 pm (UTC) (Link)

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It's all I can see now. But I think I'll wait and see what other ppl's initial reactions are.
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ellensmithee From: ellensmithee Date: February 14th, 2004 02:55 pm (UTC) (Link)

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No salve this time. You deserve it!!!

;-)

I did change it after all. It was driving me nuts. Thanks for noticing, BTW!
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ellensmithee From: ellensmithee Date: February 14th, 2004 03:00 pm (UTC) (Link)

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No, it's all good. Just shows that even drabbles need a beta sometimes. :-(
lauriegilbert From: lauriegilbert Date: February 14th, 2004 03:06 pm (UTC) (Link)
I have to say I love the line:
She who had taught him everything about plants, their uses and their... abuses.
ellensmithee From: ellensmithee Date: February 14th, 2004 03:11 pm (UTC) (Link)

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*squees* That's foreshadowing.

Thanks!
marksykins From: marksykins Date: February 14th, 2004 06:11 pm (UTC) (Link)
*cry*! Happy Valentine's Day, Marks -- Neville's evil!

Hee. I actually rather loved this, ellen. Nice work.
ellensmithee From: ellensmithee Date: February 14th, 2004 07:26 pm (UTC) (Link)

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*cry*! Happy Valentine's Day, Marks -- Neville's evil!

Yes, he's evil, but he's pining away for his loyal Hufflepuff bride! Isn't that like totally romantic?

I actually rather loved this, ellen. Nice work.

Thanks! I was in the mood for dark and Gothic today. :-)

asterie_smiles From: asterie_smiles Date: February 14th, 2004 07:42 pm (UTC) (Link)
Oooh... *stares in awe* DEFINITELY liking that...
ellensmithee From: ellensmithee Date: February 14th, 2004 08:30 pm (UTC) (Link)

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Thanks! *feels all sorts of warm fuzzies*
hippiechiq From: hippiechiq Date: February 17th, 2004 01:26 am (UTC) (Link)
Ooooh. Very nice.
ellensmithee From: ellensmithee Date: February 17th, 2004 12:23 pm (UTC) (Link)

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Thanks!
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